Really very good.
This is very promising. Good music, an interesting animation style, and rather well storyboarded.
I say work as many of the characters in as possible - you know, as and when you can. It's a series, so there's no harm in that ambition. Personally, I wouldn't want to see the swordsman with the hat and shuriken attached to his sword though. That design was pretty lame, imho. His opponent was cool though.
One good laugh is not enough
I didn't think the set-up was particularly funny. The final punchline was good, though.
one good laugh is good enough in a short. if it was a long production where there were SUPPOSED to be multiple funny lines, and only one of them actually struck, then i would say one laugh is not enough.... i guess what i'm saying is you're wrong
If I were drinking milk it'd have come out my nose
...but I wasn't. Very funny though. I wish you'd parodied the bit at the end of the credits though, because that was RIPE for it.
Excellent!
I really enjoyed the art/animation style, and it was really funny too. Good job! 8 out of 10 so you have something to strive for. ;)
Very slick!
Wow, not what I was expecting from the title, but very awesome.
And don't worry about your English - There are plenty of people out there, including me, who can only speak one language.
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